Talk:Chapter 1
This page and subsequent ones could be improved in a couple of ways:
- More exhaustive sources: for instance, in the first entry, the sentence "Also, bene [Latin] = "well-intentioned", observes Molly Hite." Who's Molly White? Where did she observed it?
- Update of dead links and cross-referencing of information: for instance, second entry, "Pynchon worked on aspects of NORAD [later acronym] when he was at Boeing." without source.
- Readibility: style uniformity when quoting texts, single words and links, for instance.
